Tears Everywhere Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Tears Everywhere

Rating: 4.5


when you were brought to the sky
because youre more beautiful
its angels started to cry
and for taking your soul
began to feel sigh
why you took her
and left me to dry
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i tried to follow her
but my hands deny
come and take me
i wanna too die
for being alive without love
is nothing but a lie
tears are everywhere
here and in the sky
over spilled water
we all do cry
but why you took her
you knew you will feel sigh
if you take me
red no longer will be my eye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Little Hatila ;) 09 October 2008

wow...very sad and full of truth...the best part of it is 'for being alive without love is nothing but a lie'......keep going...it deserves more than ten Hataw

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Nathalie Petersson 21 August 2008

Beautiful! ! I like that one! Keep writing, youre i great poetry(?) :)

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Sage of Time 11 August 2008

wow that actually made me sad...your so awesome...keep on truckin! ! ! !

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Wadeema Ali 31 July 2008

wow......very nice and sensetive poem...... keep on gud work.....ok

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Shruti Modi 30 July 2008

its very touching... i like ur style of writing...its got this unusual but very good sort of a rhyme scheme....! keep it up.. m glad u shared it...its quite personal!

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sara }i{ 16 December 2008

oh dear...it's really touching......i dont have enough words to this wonderful poem.....great B)

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Min Sia 27 November 2008

OH! ! ..I'm trying my best not to cry... But this one is one of the best poems I've ever read for this day!

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Reina Lorenzo 22 November 2008

how dare you make me cry, , sniff, sniff.. lovely piece.. interesting..

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Gutter Box 20 November 2008

Good poem. It was really sad...but I enjoyed it. You have really nice poems...keep it up once again - good job.

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Jessica Rolston 18 November 2008

this was kind of interesting...

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