That's How Sun Dies Poem by Aftab Alam
That's How Sun Dies
When all birds flew back to nest, for rest,
Sinking sun into west when floated very fast
Heavy hands and hazy mind when lost its zest,
Then I am quite sure, he is losing vigor bast,
With blurred future and present that pain,
Yet enjoys with the horror of the lovely past,
'What are my loss and what are my gain? '
These thoughts whisper; he is breathing last,
Very moving, as his last thoughts of his life flash before him he lets go of the pain he endured at times and his glory days as his soul moves into eternity! Beautiful write!
the sun breathes its last breath as the moonlit night covers its face.
What I lost and what I gained- - - - - -is the thought of Everyman.A universal tone is here in this write!
What have I lost and what have I gained. These thoughts whisper; he is breathing last. Very effective lines of a great poem.
Nice work with the muse of nature! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A good life thought poem the poet created and I likes it.
And everything happens for a reason but the reason is still a mystery until it happen. -ging-
What has lost and what has gained that is eternal question and you brightly profoundly projected
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2025 10:55:28 PM # 1.0.0
A great thoughtful poem