The Abandoned Place - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Very beautiful Mam your narration of the abandoned place.

I think I have visited these ruins, where there is no man there is true peace. Lovely stuff Rose.

Rose Marie, Well, no 'woman's

(continued) ...oops! Let me try again. Rose Marie, No 'woman's' sounds either? ? ? Now, THAT kind of place I might LOVE! ! I gived ***** aka five stars. : ) bri

I felt myself in an abandoned palace the remnants of which are still fabulous and majestic due to the lonely peacefulness

Super tanka from a super poetess............Top marks and to my favourite

Wonderful poem- tanka - rhythmic and full of joy - the sound of nature - the gentle swishing of leaves, the chirping of birds and the whistling wind....a bliss of solitude.

I have enjoyed the tranquility of a number of abandon places! .. Definitely Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

I am lost in this imagery, this beautiful dream! .. I love the feel of this and! .. Amazing title such a perfect place to be! ..

Part 3---Instead of talking trash, you give us God's earth to contemplate and behold in all its beauty. Top marks, my dear poet