The wind, angry, was shouting
sitting atop the hill
on a platform it made
out of withered leaves
and broken stones
it inhaled uphill
Below was a stream flowing
with its softened sound sizzling
The wind sent out
its humid waves downhill;
the stream ignored,
did not pick them up,
did not reconcile
I saw her treading up-hill
leisurely unmindful
after a comfortable bath
down the stream
adorning a smile
So beautifully inked. Loved the way the beauty of nature is expressed. Nice share. Thanks.
I saw her treading up-hill leisurely unmindful....pretty expression. Appreciated this magnificent poem. Top score!
Magnificent! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++
Such tensed moments do happen in life....waiting is indeed irritating...wind stream metaphor is beautiful....admired this write a lot
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An excellent poem with wonderful metaphors! Angry wind and calm stream! Stream is wise enough to ignore the wind's howl and calmly walk up-hill.