The Bluest Red Poem by Unwritten Soul

The Bluest Red

Rating: 5.0

Young blood paint my vein red,
All over my body is red,
But my heart is the most red,
Of all parts,

Blue is a molecule of my emotion
Guarding my sense of sanity
At every heart's valve

Will someone understand
If I say sometimes I'm feeling blue
Blue by the nostalgic senses
As time passes

Time didn't change my blood colour
My heart still the red-est part,
But I feel more blue,
Perhaps more second, minutes, hours, days, years passing by,
Stain my emotion deeper hue,

The calmness(blue) tame my fiery passion (red) ,
My love(red) is stronger than the coldness(blue) ,
Could be the reason of why
I witness the bluest red
And
Experience the red-est blue too.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Though I'm not active writing here anymore, I try to make a poem on my birthday. So at least I still have a new poem every year. No more it was about myself on this day, but a random idea that stuck in my mind. The raw poem in my mind was different but yeah it changed, missing some parts because too busy on other task. But at least I tried.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 13 July 2024

2) I am keeping myself young and alive by continuing to write and/or edit every day. As you know, when you stimulate the mind, you strengthen the body.

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Richard Wlodarski 13 July 2024

The Happiest of Birthdays To You, Soul! So very happy that you wrote this passionate poem. Being in retirement, I can totally connect with this poem.

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Denis Mair 29 November 2024

It's good to hear the auditory lighthouse beacon of your voice. As you say, the blood nearest the heart is pure red. No one could mistake such true-red, which is able to balance true-blue.

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M.J. Lemon 29 November 2024

Happy very belated birthday, Soul. This is a fantastic verse.

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M. Asim Nehal 11 November 2024

Awesome poem, I quote 'The calmness(blue) tame my fiery passion (red) , My love(red) is stronger than the coldness(blue) , Could be the reason of why I witness the bluest red And Experience the red-est blue too.'

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Anjandev Roy 14 July 2024

This is an excellent piece.... really powerful....

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Richard Wlodarski 13 July 2024

3) Once again, welcome back! It is indeed great hearing from you again, Poetess Friend!

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