The Corrupt Poem by Dave Alan Walker

The Corrupt

Rating: 4.6


A policeman stands
knowing his lies
have just destroyed
a life

But like a snake
That eats itself
it will all come
back around

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Misses Unknown 15 January 2012

thanks for the invite :) your poem is really gooood keep up the good work!

0 0 Reply
Eric Cockrell 15 January 2012

karma.... violent karma the worst! great piece!

0 0 Reply
Jeffrey Barnes 15 January 2012

nice piece on the corruption of power and the damage that it causes

0 0 Reply
Thaddeus Thierisch 16 January 2012

like a snake that eats itself - oh yes.

0 0 Reply
Dave James 16 January 2012

Good interpretation, well done.

0 0 Reply
Sally Plumb Plumb 11 April 2012

I agree with you.

0 0 Reply
Charles Darkly 21 January 2012

Awesome. Simply awesome.

0 0 Reply
April Mack 19 January 2012

Dave... I like! I Like!

0 0 Reply
Lasoaphia Quxazs 18 January 2012

There is good, but bad too everywhere and in every profession. This is your truth.

0 0 Reply
Pheko Motaung 18 January 2012

It's a corrupt world.And this great poem exposes it all.Lovely.Thank you very much sir

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success