The Critics Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

The Critics

Rating: 5.0

I don't know where it is
I think it's on my flash drive
Can't remember it that well
No, I didn't post it
'Cause it was said to be offensive
Though, I wanted to say it happen
And those deniers are wrong
I wish to read it once more
But when I think about it
My heart breaks
Because of those critics

Tuesday, April 12, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: criticism
I wrote a poem called Isaac about the Holcaust deniers and showed it to my Jewish friend and he said it was offensive. I was trying to say that the Holocaust DID happen and these deniers are wrong and the effect it has on the Jewish people said it was offensive. I was trying to say that the Holocaust
Dr Dillip K Swain 13 April 2022

Beautifully written. Top score!

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Richard Wlodarski 12 April 2022

Never let critics get in the way. Look what happened with Kerouac.Please post it. I would love to read it. And you know that I love your poetry!

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Kim Barney 14 April 2022

Forget the critics. Post your poem. First, proofread it to see if you can understand why your Jewish friend thought it was offensive. Rewrite parts if necessary..

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Kostas Lagos 14 April 2022

Never mind the critics. Keep on writing and posting!

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Nabakishore Dash 13 April 2022

Dear poet LeeAnn, please post what you feel as poems are feelings of your heart.Many types of people are there.each individual is unique in some way.kindly be not bothered about critics who are always there.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 April 2022

Dear friend, LeeAnn, Please don't bother about critics. They are always prowling around for no reason at all. Just go on with your poems and post whatever you think is fine.......10 for the honesty

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 13 April 2022

Like two sides of a coin, people will have different view-point, without anything else post your poems

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