The Divine Unknown Wisdom Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

The Divine Unknown Wisdom

Rating: 4.7


The child clung to his mother's breast
Warm motherly affection for her guest

She was fighting to her last breath
The divine unknown wisdom
Maternal death

(2009/2/9)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C.R. Clark 09 February 2009

A very compassionate write, Nightengale. So few words but so much feeling and emotion. Thanks...10.. Richard

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Sandra Fowler 09 February 2009

I can feel the compassion in your silent, poetic voice. Strong, condensed emotion makes these brief lines memorable. Superb write. Wrmest regards, Sandra

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Lynda Robson 09 February 2009

You seem to say so much in so few words Nightingale, this is very sad but shows the strong bond between mother and child, 10 Lynda xx

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Fiona Davidson 09 February 2009

Good strong write...Fi..10

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Tsira Goge 09 February 2009

This is a very bitter of your poems....... Tsira

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sky dreams 28 July 2009

powerful write.. happens all to often, both emotionally and physically..10+

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Tess Bybee 12 February 2009

I like this, it's well expressed in a few words. Good job.

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Anjali Sinha 10 February 2009

powerful poem i can feel that 'maternal death' -10 anjali

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Miriam Maia Padua 10 February 2009

very touching write, compassionate and loving....meaningful the great bonding between a mother and her child.... the unknown divine wisdom.... the sad parting.....which only their heart's and soul know.... 10+++

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Seema Chowdhury 09 February 2009

i could feel your passion and strong feelings behind these lines. well done.

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