The child clung to his mother's breast
Warm motherly affection for her guest
She was fighting to her last breath
The divine unknown wisdom
Maternal death
(2009/2/9)
I can feel the compassion in your silent, poetic voice. Strong, condensed emotion makes these brief lines memorable. Superb write. Wrmest regards, Sandra
You seem to say so much in so few words Nightingale, this is very sad but shows the strong bond between mother and child, 10 Lynda xx
powerful write.. happens all to often, both emotionally and physically..10+
very touching write, compassionate and loving....meaningful the great bonding between a mother and her child.... the unknown divine wisdom.... the sad parting.....which only their heart's and soul know.... 10+++
i could feel your passion and strong feelings behind these lines. well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very compassionate write, Nightengale. So few words but so much feeling and emotion. Thanks...10.. Richard