The child clung to his mother's breast
Warm motherly affection for her guest
She was fighting to her last breath
The divine unknown wisdom
Maternal death
(2009/2/9)
One of the most moving of short pieces and getting straight into the heart of any mother - - - thank you.... Fay.
wow! i just made a poem about a son and mother relationship but in a different light. read my poem ' on free love'
a poem with taking words, well penned straight to deep feelings. death is always a way to unknown. great poem indeed.
good job. it was beautiful. thanks so much for sharing this wonderful poem 10 from me
powerful write.. happens all to often, both emotionally and physically..10+
very touching write, compassionate and loving....meaningful the great bonding between a mother and her child.... the unknown divine wisdom.... the sad parting.....which only their heart's and soul know.... 10+++
i could feel your passion and strong feelings behind these lines. well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A poem that is as short as this can make a huge impact on the reader as this as done to me. That is what poetry is all about..and you have done it very well. Karin Anderson