The Driving Horse Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Driving Horse

Rating: 4.5


A beautiful horse
Pulled an oversized carriage
Pound the rough long road
In extreme hot condition
Stopped and buckled on the road.


Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved

Tuesday, November 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: horse
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 27 November 2019

This profound poem is excellently penned, dear ate Rose.....10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2019

A wonderful poem... great expression! Beautifully composed....10

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Anjandev Roy 28 November 2019

Well delineated. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 November 2019

Stopped! ! Muse of the road, Toad, load! Budden, Muse of the horse. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. 🐎

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 November 2019

Horse is changed into donkey to carry overweight cargo! !

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Shaun Cronick 28 July 2020

A metaphor poem for the mistreatment of a worker not a shirker. That's up to the reader to decide, for there are always in life givers and takers. 10+ Rose Marie for your superb poem that stops and makes one think about the outside world in general. Many thanks and remain enriched.

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Kesav Easwaran 25 January 2020

Beauty at stake. Toil over rules. Poem much symbolic 10+

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 December 2019

continued: The horse belongs to the noble breed, and then this treatment. Horrible! Man has raised the horse to its rank and then this abuse. An excellent poem about the mistreatment of a loyal worker This poem goes to MyPôemList.. A 10 Full Score and much much more. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 December 2019

I cite you here, Mrs. Juan-Austin: A beautiful horse Pulled an oversized carriage Pound the rough long road In extreme hot condition Stopped and buckled on the road. In the Netherlands it will have to deal with the group against animal abuse. We have a Party for the Animals, which ensures that an animal is treated properly

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Akhtar Jawad 01 December 2019

I have seen this scene many times here at Karachi but it was a donkey not a horse.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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