Regardless of the fact that
You gather all the roses
From the garden of desires
You can't fill the emptiness
That dwells in my barren heart.
©Aarzoo Mehek
I agree with Robert, a barren heart is always empty. Your poem demonstrates such sadness and that love will flow again.
I concur with the brilliant remark of great poet Susan Williams. its very difficult for the person of such character to get there. A powerful poem....top score!
I hope so much that this is only a brief and transient description of your heart, my friend--I think everyone should feel the sad depths because how else can we feel the joy of the heights---but getting there is sure the pits--a five star write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So true, dear Aarzoo, but this is a very sad poem. Excellent short poem about your heart's emptiness.5 Stars full score!