Under an olive tree
On the shore of sea
Hand in hand eye in eye
We used to sit, long back
My baby and me..
Through those year long tracks
Resting on the memory yacht
My mind sails towards that shore
Where we had a romantic role...
I behold the shore, the sand and sea;
Behold the well grown olive tree
Behold the waves that alone seem
To sing a different note in glee
I wanted to search the remains
Of romance we left over in the air;
Searching the tree the sand and shore
I could find them, right up there...
The new leaves; I could feel in them
The remnants of our love; their rhythm
I could hear, the one time songs, sweet
Fresh and lush in green, in them in repeat...
3rdApril 2008
Those beautiful moments of intimate love....certainly remains evergreen, through the times.....refreshing our thoughts, re-inventing the lost glory of then innocent love, everytime our mind resorts to its shelter......A superb write! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! u set the mood alright.................beautiful..........
lovely piece.. beautiful picture...sweet song merging in your piece.. a wonderful memories....worth remembering until the end of time... the remnants are still there...a living remembrance of your yesterdays... lovely.....fine flowing piece...refreshing to the heart... 10+++
What a peaceful poem. I find it amazing how some birds mate for life. Surely they would write such a poem too..if they wrote. (smile)
was a like a song in the sea shore...brought to me memories of the past...beautiful very romantic....10
very romantic, nostalgic poem Kesav. its so beautiful going down memory lane and try to recapture those utterly blissful momemts of first flush of love. its very lyrical in content and composition. loved it 10 Mamta
its a wonderful piece abt one's love and sweet rememberence abt the air that fills the environ of the special moments one spend! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the memories of love are always evergreen......a beautiful write..10