The Grass - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Grass - Tanka

Rating: 5.0

The wild verdant grass,
are moving in steady waves.
A wonderful dance!
Their movement is synchronized.
Yet free to sway with the wind.


Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 March 2024

Loved the tanka, my dear friend Rose. Top marks and to my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 March 2024

A tanka so perfect and wonderfully crafted. Loved the grass swaying inthe wind.

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M. Asim Nehal 03 March 2024

Very true, freedom is essence of life.5***

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 March 2024

Bravo My dear friend Bravo! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 03 March 2024

Precious piece..... thank u...Rose Marie...

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Rob Lamberton 20 September 2025

It is true of grass and it's true of people!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 30 April 2024

Your wonderful tanka conjures the loveliest green images! Well done.

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Rebecca Navarre 30 April 2024

Beautifully beautifully painted! .. Beautifully felt! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 30 April 2024

I've always been in awe at the ways the tall grasses move in the wind. Quite mesmerizing! ..

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Indira Renganathan 04 April 2024

Very much a picturesque write....beautiful...thank you Rose...enjoyed

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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