A transient kingdom
Creating big waves of her own
Following a path
Its strength exudes great power
Defying the wind and the sea.
Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Dear Rose, So happy to see your Tanka. Indeed, following a path of strength and power. Tops stars. Happy i could see the comment column and write. God bless Rose
Such is the nature of good poetry: it remains open to a variety of meanings. A 'ship,' for instance, may symbolize something other than a sailing vessel; even the *tanka* and *haiku* forms, in Rose's hands, radiate creativity and renewal.
People can change the world! Love defies all other elements!
Daring and adventure on the open sea requires courage and strength. A lovely tanka, Rose Marie!
Do very true Rose though it might be transient but it is powerful to make things in your favor again. Indeed they are essential and required at times yo accomplish what we have dreamt in our heart. Inspiring words to seek this transient kingdom within myself.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Top stars, of course!