The Great Sailing Ship - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Great Sailing Ship - Tanka

Rating: 5.0


A transient kingdom
Creating big waves of her own
Following a path
Its strength exudes great power
Defying the wind and the sea.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 10 June 2021

Defying the wind and the sea.....significant.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 June 2021

Quite a perceptive brief write! Well penned! !

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M Asim Nehal 11 June 2021

Yes it takes courage to sail like that. Fantastic tanka.5*****

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 15 June 2021

Daring and adventure on the open sea requires courage and strength. A lovely tanka, Rose Marie!

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Kostas Lagos 14 June 2021

Brilliant Rose Marie!

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Varsha M 11 June 2021

Do very true Rose though it might be transient but it is powerful to make things in your favor again. Indeed they are essential and required at times yo accomplish what we have dreamt in our heart. Inspiring words to seek this transient kingdom within myself.

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Top stars, of course!

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Dear Rose, So happy to see your Tanka. Indeed, following a path of strength and power. Tops stars. Happy i could see the comment column and write. God bless Rose

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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