. The Heart Poem by Eyan Desir

. The Heart

Rating: 3.4


Beating with Godly breath
Wrapped around flesh
The centre of hope
Colored with love
Fighting for acceptance
Bursting with emotion
Craving for affection

Filled with passion
Like a raging lion
A river with love
Flowing in every life
Sweet and bitter
Broken with deceit
Mended with sweet love

Helping lives on their quest
Seated in every chest
A ticking battery
Weaken by time
Stopped in sands of death!

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May26th 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subroto Chatterjee 04 June 2009

A very hearty story indeed....Now your next project: The Brain... Cheers. Subroto

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Khilil Perry 04 June 2009

Very Insightfull for every day life

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Sameer Ahmed 04 June 2009

A very splendid poem depicting all aspects of a heart including the functionality, the feelings and the emotions. The poem has ingrained in it the real happenings a heart deals with in daily life.....10/10

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Mehreen Mujeeb 04 June 2009

A lot of insight and very inspiring. your idea of the heart is captured very gracefully and composed into a poem beautifully.

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Joseph Poewhit 04 June 2009

Captures the essence of the heart's ways

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Good description of the heart. Thought you could have brought something in about a transplanted heart. Karin Anderson

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Brishti Mazumdar 08 June 2009

Colored with love......A river with love....Weaken by time.......Stopped in sands of death! ...yes...it stops...as that is the rule of life....but your poems show, your battery is running very well...10+...as I loved your thought process...Brishti...

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every aspect of the heart there in this poem

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Maya Hershey 07 June 2009

beautiful poem.... nicely done., keep up

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Kranthi Pothineni 04 June 2009

Beautiful write indeed with nice flow. Crafted very well.

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