Wanderlust Poem by subodh pandey


Rating: 4.8

Crescent moon wanders
in search of its remains
at the edge of wood
a white trail of cart track
bends towards a hut.

Jessica Layman 16 May 2012

This paints a beautiful and enchanting picture.

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Simon Collins 16 May 2012

Very nice verse, thank you

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Unwritten Soul 16 May 2012

Woah...This is so creatively constructed, the imagery so sharp and such a fantasy oriented vision...it's nice subodh keep writing! _Unwritten Soul

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Neela Nath Das 16 May 2012

As a still picture the poem is painted.Nice!

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Walterrean Salley 19 May 2012

Indeed, this is a beautiful picture, which you have painted with your poetic words. Personification of a wandering moon (one of nature's great features) . Fine job.10

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Hazel Durham 13 October 2012

Beautiful imagery, great write!

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Subodh Pandey 22 August 2012

Amen wabi someday I hope you can walk into it.

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 15 July 2012

i can depict a mind wondering on the wanders of crescent moon......! !

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Linda May Fox 27 June 2012

What a beautiful image!

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Sajna Kailas 31 May 2012

it creates a mood of a moonlit night and pictured the Crescent moon. title is awesome. I loved it! ! !

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