subodh pandey

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Wanderlust - Poem by subodh pandey

Crescent moon wanders
in search of its remains
at the edge of wood
a white trail of cart track
bends towards a hut.


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  • Jez BurlJez Burl (2/24/2018 8:18:00 PM)

    Wish I was there to savor the serenity brought by the moonlight...10++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (10/13/2012 11:14:00 AM)

    Beautiful imagery, great write! (Report)Reply

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  • Subodh Pandey (8/22/2012 4:27:00 AM)

    Amen wabi someday I hope you can walk into it. (Report)Reply

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  • Swetha VanakayalapatiSwetha Vanakayalapati (7/15/2012 2:24:00 AM)

    i can depict a mind wondering on the wanders of crescent moon......! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Linda May FoxLinda May Fox (6/27/2012 11:43:00 AM)

    What a beautiful image! (Report)Reply

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  • Sajna KailasSajna Kailas (5/31/2012 3:50:00 AM)

    it creates a mood of a moonlit night and pictured the Crescent moon.
    title is awesome. I loved it! ! !
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  • Wabi SabiWabi Sabi (5/28/2012 6:58:00 PM)

    mild and relaxing does this sound, I like it! ! I hope I run into it. (Report)Reply

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  • Walterrean Salley (5/19/2012 4:51:00 AM)

    Indeed, this is a beautiful picture, which you have painted with your poetic words. Personification of a wandering moon (one of nature's great features) . Fine job.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Neela Nath Das (5/16/2012 7:02:00 AM)

    As a still picture the poem is painted.Nice! (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (5/16/2012 6:51:00 AM)

    Woah...This is so creatively constructed, the imagery so sharp and such a fantasy oriented vision...it's nice subodh keep writing! _Unwritten Soul (Report)Reply

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  • Simon CollinsSimon Collins (5/16/2012 2:23:00 AM)

    Very nice verse, thank you (Report)Reply

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  • Jessica LaymanJessica Layman (5/16/2012 2:09:00 AM)

    This paints a beautiful and enchanting picture. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 16, 2012



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