Crescent moon wanders
in search of its remains
at the edge of wood
a white trail of cart track
bends towards a hut.
Indeed, this is a beautiful picture, which you have painted with your poetic words. Personification of a wandering moon (one of nature's great features) . Fine job.10
Woah...This is so creatively constructed, the imagery so sharp and such a fantasy oriented vision...it's nice subodh keep writing! _Unwritten Soul
i can depict a mind wondering on the wanders of crescent moon......! !
it creates a mood of a moonlit night and pictured the Crescent moon. title is awesome. I loved it! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
mild and relaxing does this sound, I like it! ! I hope I run into it.