The Humming Hope In Time Poem by adheez van der beanthz

the poem flows well indeed.we have to keep our hopes.who knows what happens at last.maybe it never gonna to be changed. actaully it s not a dark one.i think this is a love poem with the wonderful ending~nb

The poem is beautiful and I agree the title does not matter that much. What really matters is the words of the poem and message that lie there in.

Brilliant dear. Nice references. You should be read. I loved this piece of yours. without you, heaven lost its brand Very very nice

beautifully done, a real expression of the heart.

Your passion for your sweet love has grown to such an extent that you feel that without her life will become meaningless and even Heaven will lose all its charm! There is no need for any self reproach! Carry on! 54A nice poem! ! Thanks for the invitation!

Even just a glimmer of hope can really turn things around especially When it comes to love and passion. Love can be so deep sometimes it causes us to lose all sense of levity. Then we begin to ask the question how can something that feels so good cause so many problems? A nice write, keep on penning.

A very good poem, If this feeling is sin let the Hell wins These are great lines indeed, a passionate theme and a smooth rhythm, welldone,

True feelings simply stated. A lovely poem

very nice indeed......

Feelings and thoughts simply stated always has the desired effect, nicely written.