this is a story about sweat..
that conceived by mom's prayer
- who make love with misery
born because of dad's love
- who was married to poverty
and being a kid who grow up
- in the hunger's loving caress
its spirits will fly to the sky
fuse with the clouds, also the stars
then melt into rain formations
to gain its own reputation
so its ancestry will meet the sunlight
refract the paradise
where the beauty become a bride
and happiness stay for the rest of the life
someday...
earthzcity,200813
an oracle of state of the mind, resemble into reality of lines within your poem...such poetic venture quest the realm of challenges and truth of human journey of Life....Excellent master piece....a 10/10
Behind the sweat there is so many stories, with the will to survive, greatness can happen to everyone. Beautiful write!
the must important thing is that you r connected with the life - as we baked in our community and life there is the beat of your own keep up
ok, i just read your ph bio. so you write in one language and translate to english. i'm glad i don't have to try that. i would try to help you with english but it is more than i have time for now. besides, it would not be easy if i don't understand the meaning of the poem readily. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
God bless you...your heart is so pure dear adheez, i really love this work because of it's pure honesty and the truth that this sweats will be really sweet for their family who are looking forward the financials and the supporting.. well done