Tuesday, February 12, 2008

The Lord Of All Illusions

Rating: 3.7
The love that fate, in humor,
May grant a younger heart.
Will keep it pure and wholesome,
Though It's been torn apart.

As lost loves still engender
A pain at every turn.
A short term loss of memory
Is but their least concern.

But pleasure, ever present,
As all young lovers know;
When vested in such virgins,
Maintains an afterglow.

And built on firm illusions,
Young lovers, may, in vain;
Find mercy in believing,
Their love may live again.

So easily rekindled,
It only takes a spark.
Ignited by a kind word,
Into a flaming arc.

I caution every lover,
Don't be deceived by this.
It's only an illusion,
And one you should dismiss.

The myth words, here, are written.
A wisdom, best ignored.
The lord of all illusions,
'Lost love, can be restored '.
manya 24 April 2018
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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009
Love the title, enjoyed the read immensely. Took me to another place in time.
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i know about lost does hurt..this illusion keeps us going, , people would rea; ise and change
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~ Jon London ~ 06 March 2009
I think its important that we know what we have been blessed with, the lord works in mysterious ways, what is given so freely can and will be taken away.
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Underrated piece. I totally agree with the points you made. it is like backsliding.. the demons just become more...
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Wolfey, All of your poems are really good-it's difficult to choose.A ten from me.
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Kaspa Richards 29 September 2008
this is a fantastic poem i wish i had penned it extremely well wrote thank you it was a pleasure to read
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King Happy 30 August 2008
I know some people who have fallen for this illusion. Well done as it inspires me to wake them up.
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Katherine Sessor 27 August 2008
A poem that should be higher then it's voting rate. This is a great poem that deserves at least near a 10. It says so much and gives advice aswell. It flows through the readers mind after they have read it and it stays in one's heart. Least mine anyway. I love it. Kat, =)
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angelianne 1012 27 August 2008
what a fine illusion...awesome and very impressive surprised me to see the average vote when i fisrt read this made me wonder how can a great poem, with equally great insight and words and flow can have an average vote of 5.1..for me this poem is a greenwolf is simply one of the best poet here on this site...
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