The Moon Poem by Valerie Dohren

The Moon

Rating: 5.0


Beautiful lady, born of the night
Floating across the ebony sky
Clothed in soft gossamer, shimmering bright
Beneath all your charms, to love and to cry

With threads of silver curled all around
Spreading your hair as moonbeams that fall
Strands of your glory touching the ground
Celestial light, I rise to your call

Heavenly goddess, climbing so high
Waxing and waning, queen of the night
Longing to touch you, I sigh, I sigh
Wonderful vision, ethereal sight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vincent Kuo 24 May 2012

Absolutely magical, enchanting poem! Love the vivid metaphor in your second stanza!

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Elena Sandu 22 May 2012

Your wonderful choice of words, are making my love for the Moon grow more and more. Thank you!

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Smoky Hoss 21 May 2012

Such grace and beauty of words. Very, very nice.

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Captain Cur 19 May 2012

Shimmering moonbeams guide me on home. Valerie wrote such an elegant poem. Pirate Girl.

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Ken E Hall 19 May 2012

The ever shining moon lovers will see beautiful poem...regards

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Tim Dugan 08 November 2012

Uh, I think the moon is a man. I've seen pictures! ; -) No, seriously though, this is beautiful. Thank you, Tim

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Dee Corpolongo 01 November 2012

Beautiful description of our nightly wonder in the sky. I love the moon along with the stars that shine so bright. and I seem to favor moon poems most of all. Excellent tribute to its beauty here. Thank you, Val, again and again!

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Very lovely, magical poem. I also love poems about the moon. thank you for reviewing mine

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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 June 2012

Lovely. I'm very fond of moon poems.

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James Casey 25 May 2012

Grace and beauty are the theme here, keep up the magical words

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