every day
every single day
you carry on your way
no disgust shown
not tired or worn
not a dropp of sweat from your brow
kisses the ground
with that pleasant smiley round
every day
every single day
you carry on your way
not a duty or compulsion you show
you touch every bit of this earth
that you have given birth...with joy
you touch every life on this earth
that it has given birth..with pride and joy
the granny and mummy you are
that pleasant smiley round...THE SUN
with that joy in your face
every day
every single day
you carry on your way
I'm glad you clarify who you are writing this about as the poem progresses... I was just about to feel horrible about myself as a mother because I ceratinly have days where I am 'tired and worn' and have ample 'disgust shown'. Nice metaphor, though!
A very beautiful and fine poem for a mother. All mothers are same in nature. This is really a good poem, Samanyan.........10. Best Wishes Naseer
A beautifully written dedication piece to the most precious love...that of a mother.....great piece Sam...thanks for the share
great tribute to the best person on earth.....mom! ! well penned
the perfect picturisation of a Mother... the 2nd n 4th stanza touched me a lot.10 up for this.
great and brilliant poem... no disgust shown as it continues to shine the world everyday... every single day to watch over her children giving light and life to every living things on earth... the very proof of God's wisdom...The Sun... what would life be without this pleasant smiley round? a wonderful poem of nature's gift...of God's gift.. The mystery of His wisdom... and as human, we have to take part in protecting it... to let it continue to carry on its way.. a very fruitful share, my friend... 10++++ l♥ vel♥ ots, maia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The son, the moon and the earth are your favorite metaphors. The Sun as the granny and mommy......A wonderful image. The life on earth is much dependent on sun. A universal poem. Regards Naseer