The Photograph Poem by Patricia Gale
The Photograph
Rising from the sea
Like a ball of fire
Crimson red and orange flickering in the sky
Gentle breezes blowing kisses upon our cheeks
Cool morning air
Bringing us closer to feel the warmth of our hearts
Waves dancing to greet her beauty
The world still silent from its slumber
A melody from the sea splashing against the shore line
Sharing this moment with you
Was like a piece borrowed from heaven
Adding an angel to behold it with
To hold your hand and walk upon the sand
A picture I still envision
As I hold the photo of a different place and another time
The masterful wordsmithing of your pen holds the true pictorial prints.... Your words flow as they sould capturing every ray of light.....well done..
To quote ' Sharing this moment with you Was like a piece borrowed from heaven Adding an angel to behold it with' Vow! What wonderful words! an inspired writing taking us to an imaginary world.10
Well done Patricia! You painted a memorable picture with this...'Crimson red and orange flickering in the sky' was a great example of your imagery. Top marks! -Michael
ah, and the magic of sunrise with one you have so loved...throughout past time! A heavenly picture you paint with words! Blessings, Theo
mmm..this poem jus takes u away...ilke u said to a different time and different place....i could jus lose myself completely...lovely poem..love LeilaXXXX
YOU SET A MYSTICAL AMBIENCE ABOUT THIS WORK...LOVE THE FINAL 2 LINES! FJR
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This is just lovely, I can picture it all, absolutely delightful and so moving. Well done. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX