I watched intently
The setting sun's dying rays
Glistened off the hill.
Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
I read Kostas' Now the sun can rise', and now yours, The Sunset, a Haiku that takes you to a sunset yon of the hill. Beautiful.
Your words carry us to the scene and we participate in the feeling. Only the great can do that!
Moments of the setting sun so beautifully captured here! .. Again with ever such moving feelings! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
Beautiful imagery! I am someone who gets excited during a sunrise or sunset and every other day I take photos in my phone to keep those memories alive :)
sun's dying rays Glistened off the hill. even in the death, the rays glisten and gives beauty to the hill and to you who observe it. tony
A wonderful poem that drags me to read it again and again!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An amazing haiku, dear ate Rose......10+++