The Tears Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

The Tears

Rating: 5.0


To you
As I stand in the grass with dew
My ripped Vans are soaked
I swear to the g-ds
The sun is too bright
To stay outside
Better go in
Because I don't want the tears
Glistening in the light

Friday, May 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 20 October 2020

Don't be afraid to let the tears show, but go ahead and let them flow; that just lets others know what's in your heart.

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Bharati Nayak 01 May 2020

A touching expression of inner sadness, When we keep our pain within ourselves, we do not want it to show others.Tear is also a great reliever

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 August 2020

A poignant piece of work! Short but highly expressive.....10

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 June 2019

Better go in Because I don't want the tears Glistening in the light.. glistening tears..... fine expression conveying the feelings. tony

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Chinedu Dike 16 December 2019

Well articulated and nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Kingsley Egbukole 28 September 2023

Expressing sad emotions. But let the tears flow to get some relief.

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Anjandev Roy 28 September 2023

This is a superb piece..... thank u... LeeAnn...

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Dr. Antony Theodore 09 May 2021

I don't want the tears Glistening in the light What a fine expression. tears..such a great sorrow pictured so well that the reader is sad with you. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 May 2021

Most intelligently said and composed, LeeAnn, I constantly enjoyed the humor in your poems, brilliantly formulated, thank you so much for sharing this amazing poem.

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Anjandev Roy 07 February 2021

Fantastic......thanks for sharing...

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