The User Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
The User
what is it they are 'getting' from me-
thought the stream-
as it was passing by the two of them.
the two of them were 'using' the flow of the stream
to make a small turbine run-
the turbine in turn made a bulb burn
'Aaah' that was it thought the stream.
: 'If they could see the light in my rattle-
why are they so deaf to my chatter? '
thought the stream as it was saying bye.
a very nice imaginative write sir....very interesting indeed
Short but substantive. Thanks for sharing.
The interaction between man and nature is always interesting. But we seldom get feedback from streams, etc. Praise for your rich imagination. Kind regards, Sandra
very beautiful, how often we ignore the obvious, right in front of our eyes. in life too we try to think of eways somebody can be useful. deep reflection, in a state of zen10 Mamta
I am much impressed by the poem....... really a creative thought and penned in a simple and eloquent way.
very meaningful...impressive great concept flowing like a significant stream... something in it is so touching.. i like this....really has deep meaning... 10++++++
This was a very creative writing. I am very impressed by this. I thought the tone was absolutely wonderful. The atmosphere was perfect, as was the whole presentation of the piece. I can't say enough good things about it. Just tremendous! GW62
Some things in life seem constant, but a river can change courses.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 9:32:31 AM # 1.0.0.1119
a genuine doubt of the stream!