If you want to go to heaven
But your sins are all to blame
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I thought this was a clever piece until I read the other comments - and learned the source of your inspiration - Now it's even funnier! You pen comedy well. love, Allie xxxx
Your poetry reveals a light and happy ticker. Let it give many pause to think and enjoy a brief snicker :)
LOL! ! I don't know if 7 times would be enough for me..... HG: -) xx
Hey Jojo I had to read this 6 times! Wait a sec..................................................................................................... make that 7! Loved it!
Hey Jojo this is fab, Im just getting to know David, he told me about your poem so well done, full marks, cheered me up no end, thanks.
LOL...Nicely done! ! Wonderful tribute to our friend...Dodgey Dave the Vicar! ! Hugs, Dee
It is a wonderful tribute to a very wonderful man, My sweet friend across the sea. Loved it. Pam
This is a fabulous poem, a lovely tribute to an awesome guy.--Melvina--
Ahh, Dodgy David - what an awesome individual, and equally awesome poet! Nice little tribute to a true man of the cloth. Nice piece, Jo Jo. Linda :)
Very nice poem. David has helped me get through tough times and I thank him greatly for that. He is an amazing person. I give this a 10, amber xoxox
A tribute to a wonderful person, I agree. Dodgy Dave has been a fantastic support to me and it's nice for others to appreciate him, too. Thank you for this, JoJo. Love, Fran xxx
A fun title and some light-relief here, well done, Love duncan X
JoJo... Your not supposed to tell tales about the vicar... Even when he is very Dodgy...
JoJo, I haven't stop laughing since I read this. It is brilliant. Thank you for the mention. Top marks without question. Dodgy Dave the Vicar.
I like your sense of humor.