The Walls Around Me Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

The Walls Around Me

Rating: 5.0


The walls around me
Are not there
To suffocate me
It's fairly there to
Ensure my sanity
To keep me safe
From the prying eyes
Of the troublemakers.



© Aarzoo Mehek

The Walls Around Me
Monday, August 17, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 17 August 2020

WOW..........Awesome. " The Great Wall of Aarzoo" 10++++ But please ensure " Deewaron ke kaan nahi hai " else they will hear the wisphers of your heart...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2022

I can feel the importance of those walls around you. Loved the excellent rendition. Top score!

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Rajnish Manga 18 August 2020

It is a pity that a woman feels vulnerable even after seventy three years of country's Independence. Thanks for raising the issue which calls for action at multiple levels.

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Soran M. H 18 August 2020

it is so well penned and showing us the other sides of things, for example the wall can be for prison and for houses, for protecting and for punishment...well crafted have a big 10 dear poet Aarzoo

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Soran M. H 18 August 2020

The walls around me Are not there To suffocate me

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 August 2020

The walls not to divide but to shield and protect. Well penned poetic expression......10+++

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