The Wind - Ο Άνεμος Poem by Kostas Lagos

The Wind - Ο Άνεμος

Rating: 5.0


She was dreaming in her tent...

To be carried by the wind like a leaf...

One day the wind heard her lament...

It blew so hard that lift her up...

.............And threw her over a cliff...



Στη σκηνή της ονειρευόταν........

Να την ταξιδέψει ο άνεμος ευχόταν.......

Μια μέρα άκουσε ο αγέρας το κλάμα της το γοερό.....

Τη σήκωσε φυσώντας δυνατά.....

...................................Και την έριξε απ' το γκρεμό

Sunday, October 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,irony,wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 18 October 2020

This is simply brilliant......enjoyed it......thank u, dear friend...anjandev roy.

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Panagiota Romios 18 October 2020

How dramatic. I best not end up as she 5 stars Panagiota

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Varsha M 19 October 2020

And she was injured In pool of blood Though her deam was fulfilled She is bitterly scarred.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 October 2020

Kostas! what an interesting poem! . The wind carrying her like a leaf and then, throwing her off the cliff. Hope the graceful leaf like lady, landed safely, in spite of the forceful wind.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 October 2020

I hope the wind will carry her back to the safety of her home. A great imaginative write with compelling imagery.

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Terry Craddock 01 November 2020

A Vacant Tent To Rent she was dreaming in her tent she could not pay the rent her last money now was spent; concerned about where to live no more money left to give who money owed would forgive? but there was a happy ending she sudden took up mending was soon much money making; she joined a famous stage company sowed ripped costumes for free she had won national lottery; Dedicated to the poet Kostas Lagos.

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Terry Craddock 01 November 2020

Lament Provoking The Wind a warning concerning day dreaming lamenting out loud provoking the wind; on a wind blown cliff top sudden wind blast unexpected can blow you off cliff top into far below waiting sea drowning; now calculate the odds of surviving; Inspired by the poem 'The Wind - Ο Άνεμος' by the poet Kostas Lagos. Dedicated to the poet Kostas Lagos.

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Terry Craddock 01 November 2020

Lament Lifted Up: Carried Away By The Wind a warning concerning day dreaming a spoken habit lamenting out loud danger not provoking the wind; a sailors superstitious moral tale without a ship or a reef to go aground on or hazard cliff to storm sail into; lifted up carried away by provoked wind blown off cliff by sudden wind blast an uncommon threat cliff walker should know; adds new layers to both swept off your feet and cliff diving now calculate the odds of surviving;

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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2020

Ha ha ha better remain grounded with realities. Fantastic one Kostas.10***

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Terry Craddock 23 October 2020

a warning concerning day dreaming, lamenting out loud, and not provoking the wind; a sailors moral tale without a ship or a reef to go aground on, or cliff to storm sail into; adds no layers to both swept off your feet and cliff diving

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