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Rose Marie Juan-austin
Laoag City, Philippines
Saturday, November 14, 2020

The Wind Of Fate

Rating: 4.8
He manipulates the wheel of life
Masterly woven his past
Carefully paints the present
Collects tons of gold for his future.

The Wind of Fate forced its way
Handed him a Scroll
A verdict....
A World of Nothingness.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan Austin, All Rights Reserved
Rose Marie Juan-austin
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COMMENTS
Tom Allport 08 December 2020
A wonderful interesting write of how fate always takes a hand in all well made plans? ...well penned.
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Mahtab Bangalee 08 December 2020
greatly penned the fate~ Everything was, and is perfect As the perfection, in the imprudent treasure of present the future has been collected! but the fate maybe the exemplary destructive gate!
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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 December 2020
A powerful poem, superbly articulated and powerfully presented in verse! A poem with a lot of power in the words, can only be created by the great poetess This fantastic poem is worth ti be read time and again.5 Stars full vote, to MyPoemList. Thank you so much for sharing
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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 December 2020
When someone is at the height of power and thinks nothing can happen to him, life is one revolving fate, and it can blow against the grain at any moment, just shake it off its pedestal!
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Shaun Cronick 25 November 2020
Rose Marie your superb poem is more than worthy of another reread and again more than worthy of five shining stars. Many thanks and take care. I wish you well.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 24 November 2020
Your well written poem depicts the ultimate end result of money obsession.5 Stars
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Shaun Cronick 24 November 2020
There's always a payoff for those who seek a foolish and wanton ideology, principle or self enforcing vain belief. For what goes around eventually comes around. A superbly well written powerful tour de force of a poem, presenting a more than fine moral message to any reader. Five worthy and respected stars. Richly and deservedly bestowed. Thank you for writing and sharing your poem Rose Marie and I wish you well. Take care and remain poetry blessed.
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Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2020
The Wind of Fate would be able to blow away any iron rimmed authoritarian wheel... Nice poem, Rose. The imagery brings in a powerful message. Five stars
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 November 2020
Judgement! ! Ways of mankind on earth; With our works. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Valsa George 21 November 2020
People make many plans and schemes. Some manipulate everything for selfish ends. But when one is standing on the pinnacle of glory, fate can veer around in an adverse way at an unexpected time and quake him out of his pedestal! A great truth beautifully presented in verse!
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