Invisible to the eyes
yet shivers up the senses
Every swift turn
Carries pleasing fragrances.
Breaks the monotony
of dead and drearyness,
Invoking new life
through its magical caress.
Inspires each and all
to move ahead with gusto and sway,
The essence of living
rhymes with the wind's way...
I liked the ending very much. you are a true dilliwala poet...gud keep it up.read my poem called BOOKMARK and THE RAIN SONG
this is a cool! ! breezy write indeed! ! ! liked it very much! ! ! great one to get away from the rat race we are engaged in.. nice write friend...10 with love shan
Wind is indeed the essence of living. Your words beautifully flow like cool wind. Nice to read you again. Best Wishes Naseer
fighting with wind is a fascinating experience, isn't it?
the wind almost brushed me and went on its way.it does make itself felt with its whispering caress! dear vaibhav, you write so beautifully it touches my soul.great poem, and it is going down as my favourite.!
This piece is timeless like the stardust that flows through my vines it is truly beautiful
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A p; easing poem about the wind, but don't forget it also can blow dust in your eyes