The withering rose
Showcases the
Intensity of pain
It has suffered
At the hands of
It's tormentor
The dripping candle
Is the sole witness
Of a troubled night
Excellent metaphor. The ‘dripping' alone can tell us the story of the troubled night, the ‘withered rose' has gone through, has endured….painful to read! But that is what makes a poem "sublime poetry". Top score. MyFavouritePoems..
A deeply poignant yet beautiful poem adorned with great imagery and metaphors. Brilliantly penned.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Who the tormentor is? Hope only man.