The Zombies Of The Graveyard Comments

The way you described the zombies and how the sunlight can kill them is very realistic. I could feel the cold breeze of the graveyard too. Amazing poem.. love it!

the makes it feel like you are really watching a scary movie. LIVE LIFE DARK

your poems are amazing to me and i love how this makes me wrinkle up my nose as if i can smell the graveyard, thank you for a look into your perspective, very unique

wow! amazing, u hv a good talent in poetry! like this poem..

well penned.....thanks for sharing....sebastine

This is a very well written poem with ghastly images of 'The Night Of The Living Dead'. Keep up the good work. Love & hgs, Barbara

Lovely poem wondefully written nice job

Grisly fantasy presented in poetic prose

Odysseus alive goes down to Ades and meets some dead characters. Mr Jordan took some corpses to earth carrying out a fantasy in fluent style. They both have come to grips with somebody.

woah I just Love how you described the Zombies Showing how Gross and Creepy they are. You gave a True Shocking Image here....well done.... Great Write

creepy, gross, vivid. Very good. Very different from most poems I have read. But earns as A+ just the same. Great write

a truely fantastic array of imagery used int his poem... i love how it appeals to the senses... fantastic

Wonderful speculation about zombies and graveyard. Good writing. Should I wish in your young age you write about love, song, future and beautiful dreams. Let that for the elderly and religious men.

that's scary....I enjoyed it! Good write!

wow full of a lot of detail and emotion...awesome job.

that was awsome its scary in a cool way nice poem

careful dan.. i scare easy... solid poem

Hi Dan. I now know more about Zombies than I thought I knew. A melting pot of great things about them. You are the gate keeper. I loved it. I thought I'd let you know that I am an embalmer by trade and in my new website design you can see me in the embalming room singing a song Ha ha Paul. I also read Adeline Foster's poem 'Clowns'. Boy are we original or what? . This morning I am adding one about Princess Diana's death. Paul.

hey dan great work buddy wish you luck for future

this poem is really good....you deserve an applause.....i love the way you have described it sooo well.....the first para and the second are the best....a very nice imagination you have....keep it up... San