Thirst Of Soul Poem by ramesh rai

Thirst Of Soul

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Life is the eternal thirst of entity soul
desires for a pervasive blooming life
to dwell in life life long
to enjoy fantasy of life
precisive allurement mingle the life
makes to dwell in despite of thousand perplexities
encounters trouble
gets rid of troubles

soul which is invisible
only an imagination
monitor the life
performs for the life

life without soul is dead
that so, always desires to exist
unless discharging all duties of life

life is a mirth for the soul
life comes life goes
but soul passes all the way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 12 August 2013

''life without soul is dead '' excellent line....very lovely..

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Rekha Mandagere 12 August 2013

The message life is mortal where as spirit or soul is eternal which is passed on to others. It is beautifully written.

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Valsa George 13 August 2013

Yes Ramesh, man without soul is reduced to just pounds of flesh! An irrefutable truth! ! A beautiful write!

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Aswath Raman 13 August 2013

Lives are mere days of a soul and darkness is the death. And soul lives forever. A nice write sir!

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Poetheart Morgan 13 August 2013

The thirst of the soul is to be able to express itself freely in communion with the mind and body. It knows everything and the mind is always the great opponent. Go away the body and remains the soul. Free to learn again.

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Hazel Durham 20 August 2013

Eternal soul that brings harmony and reason to our lives with truth and a promise of days of happiness! Beautiful write!

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Yasmin Khan 14 August 2013

Human soul is eternal and life is so exciting, attractive that rarely any one wants to die.We want to live life to its fullest.

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2013

Life comes and goes but what remains is Soul...Fantastic poem..Life must be lived as its God's gift...Loved reading it..

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Valerie Dohren 13 August 2013

Life without soul is dead - my favourite line, and for everyone else it seems. Very true, if we have no soul then we are not alive. Very good write Ramesh.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 August 2013

Life without soul is dead Powerful indeed. It defines living dead. Life must be lived. Nice poem. Thank you.

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