Time Poem by Valerie Dohren

We are made to melt into eternal.A unique poem on Time.

Terrific, simple, succinct, poignant and beautifully precise.

An alive poem with a vast canvas that touches the eternity...! ! !

The meaning of life summed up in a short poem Hawkins wrote a huge book and the majority of us still are none the wiser! BANG, tick tock, seasons turn, eternity, and that's it. Brilliant Val.

That's the only thing we cannot stop, time. It comes and it goes, it goes. Beautiful. Mohabeer Beeharry

How very short and simple! Just as time flies by, you captured it right here in these words! Isn't it funny how when we are young, time seems to take forever, yet as we age it just flies by! In the blink of an eye! Loved this!

Wonderful poem..Just in counts we are in eternity, time is flying so fast.. Very true..good message. Loved it. ,

A very active, fast moving poem - gripping lines

Time ticks. Seasons and eons pass into eternity. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

Short and nice. Thanks for sharing...