Time Traveling Mind Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Time Traveling Mind

Rating: 5.0

Shape shifting images
of a time traveling mind
flying through the sky
in the blink of an eye

Not knowing
the year or the time
as I travel through
the centuries of my mind

One day I will find
peace of mind

Jinal Oswal 15 December 2011

Wonderful write, flying through the sky in the blink of an eye We travel miles in our thoughts, thinking of our lives, wondering what it would be in future.. how was it in past.. And now we are back in the present wondering whether the peace for which our heart quenches... when and where will we find it? ? I loved this beautiful poem :)

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Silentpoet Grl 15 December 2011

Fantastic! You are a great poet. I love this one! -the closing line is brilliant- Great job!

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Vipins Puthooran 15 December 2011

'tis a phenomenal poem by a magnificient write! ! ! ! top marks! ! ! !

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Eric Cockrell 15 December 2011

well written, once again... we walk thru the halls of infinity never knowing the breadth!

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Craig Anderson 18 December 2011

Wicked last two lines. Put the cherry on the cake for me Dave.

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Millie Fraser 19 January 2012

really like this, love how it ends with hope

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Smoky Hoss 26 December 2011

The mystery of living goes on... nice poem Dave!

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Rekha Mandagere 22 December 2011

The two challenging concepts, the time and the human mind is perceived in a spectacular way. Nice poem.

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Robert Beck 21 December 2011

I enjoy your work, I am able to grasp the meaning of words as they flow from your mind. So many of the writers can't keep things simple and their poems are not always understandable to me, you don't have that problem.

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Yatin yadvansh 18 December 2011

well done...... u will find peace.... read my.... miss you...poem

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