To Linger Not… Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

i like it, man. the details are following emotions and human features, so it has a good connection. kudos.

'non my face reveals' an expression I struggle with, cause all I find is the face of mine in the screan throughout I read. GReat write...8

Sir, great write. Thanks for asking me to read. Every word brings emotion..Great

Yes you did Know what I was going to like... I feel related to this poem very much.. it is what I am going through right now... Thank you very much for telling me to read: D Very very nice and well written: D

ur right i do like it......wait i lied.....i loved it it was awesome.....

i love the way that you used deep word i like it ver much its awesome

cry for not my presence but my loose of love leaves you to the pain..... what a sweeten words that hold every feeling to say good bye..... ....i like you poem to ponder....it makes me strong.....thank you...God bless...10/10

really splendidly written.. Eyes dry prevent Ready to lie; pretend to smile; You fail to read the pains In my feel; no fault yours liked the lines very much

your right i did love it its pretty good on how you used your words it gave me a clear image

i love it your use of words create a strong image