Coming out from room to top of the floor,
We with enthusiasm watch this lunar eclipse,
Longest eclipse of this century this is,
Eternal mind gently feels longest breath.
Lengthening hand every person wants to touch
Giving a hug mind crawls and hits lunar surface,
Moon is caught in hand and emotion shares love,
Eclipse is going on and thumb presses Moon.
Holding Moon in palm son requests father to wait,
This half silvery bright and half dark Moon tells,
Children getting fun shout breaking tranquility,
Whole family of the world wants to see Blood Moon.
This is amazing to hold longest eclipsed Moon
In tender hand of love, peace, bliss and happiness,
God has given power to self luminous soul to feel,
Greatest celestial truth is visible with Mars here.
Father tells son in care to hold Moon for long,
Neither do fingers pinch nor do nails rub or cut,
All of us should hold Moon as space holds in love,
Power of dignity gives power of judgement to feel.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,28 July 2018. All rights Reserved.
A wonderfully crafted piece of work. So magical. I could feel the intensity of waiting the moon to come out from the celestial dome.. It is great having to know the earnest efforts made by children to see a great event. Amazing poem worthy of 10+++++
Beautifully sewn across the skies, with such emotion love and life! .. And so beautifully spoken of God and the beauty he put in the night! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
It requires great imagination to write such a poem and also a lot of planned forethought to take such an image! Laudable effort!
wonderful way of expressing your imagery thoughts, and the image you shared, literally do explain that uniquely with accurate meaning :)
nice stanza- This is amazing to hold longest eclipsed Moon In tender hand of love, peace, bliss and happiness, God has given power to self luminous soul to feel, Greatest celestial truth is visible with Mars here.
Moon must have been thankful to this lovely touch oa graet poet like Kumarmani Mahakul.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is amazing to hold longest eclipsed Moon In tender hand of love, peace, bliss and happiness, God has given power to self luminous soul to feel, Greatest celestial truth is visible with Mars here. Very fine poem and very fine photo......... you have a wonderfull family dear Kumaramani...... life is a joy when we are with all the others to enjoy the nature's great episodes.. God the Almighty bless u always. tony