Tough Epitaph Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Tough Epitaph

Rating: 5.0


gloomy whirlpools
surf me soundlessly
let by ones be by ones
our souls follow dearly

endless dreams
begin to hover above
beyond unrequited love
there are unpredictable sins

mild minarets
notice nostalgias
who ever be in love
will never feel any grief

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Victor Sklyarov)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

'mild minarets notice nostalgias who ever be in love will never feel any grief' The idea you have incorporated in these conclusive lines is very nice. I do like it. Thanks for this beautiful work,10+

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Joseph Poewhit 30 May 2009

Like the middle verse a lot. Deep thoughts there

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 May 2009

Tough epitaph speaks of an endless dream of a soul resting in peace.

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Seema Aarella 10 June 2009

last lines are wonderful, to love is to embrace grief but the magic of love is that it gives strength to withstand grief! ! ! !

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Obinna Eruchie 02 June 2009

a nice flowing poem.

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Meghan Pearson 01 June 2009

Uhhg that was stinkin amazing! ! ! it has my favorite word in there too nostalgia

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Surya . 31 May 2009

beautifull poem.great dedication.posted 10 surya

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Ramesh T A 30 May 2009

Nice to read a good poem!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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