Tranquil Beneath The Trees Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Tranquil Beneath The Trees

Rating: 4.8


The moon and the stars share the sky's peace,
While the sun after roaming now sleeps.
Calm as mist silver, the night appeals
In a kind crawling across the streets.
Underneath these fifty four score trees,
I walk 'midst their calmness my heart seeks.
My soul dwells upon the nature's greens,
Edible with taste of hush that creams.
My heart airy running as wind speeds.

To joy's brink, my essence, penchant leads,
Like gazelle feathered across with beams.
In this park, the beechen frames are scenes
Of serenity, like mountains' peaks
On the orb, my essence tender sees.
Nature in a way as a guardian treats
One with cloud-like harmony one feels.
Of the walk bliss I 'am enjoying keeps,
Lit my essence tender to increase.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michelle Kafka 15 September 2009

The first stanza is my favourite as it reels me in to my comfy tranquil place. Thanks for sharing.

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warner treuter 15 September 2009

Last line magical and I don't know why.

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Matt Mooney 09 September 2009

You recreate for me the magic of a moonlit night. The language and imagery are superb.10.

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Analisssa Range 07 September 2009

I love this poem Its amazing how a walk in the woods can calm you body and soul. Great write keep it up.

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Jester's P 06 September 2009

beautiful... nature made us and out of nature we are fome and of course to nature we all come back. however the peace and calmness man could experience through nature is a stroke of the 'mother' to his son...

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Krisdale Talidong 20 November 2009

A great poem... I feel I'm been graced with the winds of tranquility while reading this poem...^__^

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Rhiley Anne Vincent 13 October 2009

Beautiful english you use! A true poets poem

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Sayz LFlynn 05 October 2009

great imagrey Obinna, keep up the great work! 10! !

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Paul Du Plessis 01 October 2009

I could imagine myself beneath the trees. Thank you.

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Zachary Clark 20 September 2009

This is a good poem I like the imagery. Draw back the rhyming is slightly forced and too wordy.

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