Tricks Poem by Rini Shibu

Sounds like forced rhymes and not a poem. I hope you can take this criticism.

Don’t sound forced at all to me, a sequence of three different rhymes within six lines, I think it was quite nice

Hi Rini, Quite a positive write, as you are. Your invocation: : Rise From The Ashes Like A Phoenix: : reflects the monumental exhortations in Bhagawat Gita. Congrats.

Yes, we should not give up if a trick failed in the game of life, their are many more tricks ahead. A wonderful poem by my lovely friend Rini Shibu, who thinks before she inks.

We are all magicians in our life. Here one minute gone the next. Great poem Rini.++10

a poem of never giving up but to always try a different way? ............well penned

Life is a game, ............ in this we humans should play well avoiding hypocrisy, ..... thanks for sharing the poem with us

I could not properly understand the philosophy behind this poem! Any way, I love reading poems of one of my favorite poetess Rini! ......10

I am probably reading this with the wrong mind set- -but I see this as a weary and sad comment on a world where success and fame can be won by tricks being played.... am I way off track? The mind set of a reader can sure create havoc with the author's intentions. I liked the style in which you wrote this poem- -it fit.