M A Uzefa Rashida

Gold Star - 5,338 Points (16-08-1976 / Pernambut, Vellore District, Tamil nadu, India)

Two Hearts - Poem by M A Uzefa Rashida

Two hearts
I waited for you dear,
for you to come near.
I waited for you long,
for you to sing a song.
What maketh you so dull?
What maketh you to cry?
Why don't you come to me,
to share with me my joy?
I often wondered why,
You never ever smile,
What makes you shed a tear?
What is that you fear?
Weakened is your heart,
burdened with your sorrow.
Could you lend me some
if I would like to borrow?

You waited for me dear,
I too wanted to be near,
I want to sing a song,
but don't know what I long.
I do, feel your joy
your joy makes me cry,
my sorrows may lessen your cheer
that is what I fear.
I do want to smile,
When my loved ones are near
but always shed my tear
when a brilliant laugh I hear.
Strengthened is my heart
unburdened are my sorrows,
your little words of love
has made the distance narrow.

Come to me my love
Hold my hands in yours
for I want to enjoy the moment
forever being yours.

Topic(s) of this poem: true love

Form: Lyric

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Here I would like to show how hearts get connected.A true heart recognises the pain of another heart and makes an attempt in breaking the ice. Sorrows if shared makes life easy to live. So a true loving heart finds a true loving and longing companion.

Comments about Two Hearts by M A Uzefa Rashida

  • (6/12/2016 6:02:00 AM)

    A beautiful and a reflective write, take care (Report) Reply

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  • (5/2/2016 11:40:00 AM)

    Beautiful poetry. Love is not just two hearts getting to know each other, it is they share the happiness, the pain of one another. Very fluent rhyming words, bringing forth the true mood of the poem. Good. And thank you for sharing. Do keep writing.

    One suggestion: 04th line in the second stanza could be corrected as:
    but don't know what for I long.
    It makes the line grammatically correct on one part. It give the correct meter to the line too. Pl forgive me if I am trying to correct an English professor!
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  • Kim Barney (4/3/2016 9:47:00 PM)

    I like this, especially these lines:
    Weakened is your heart,
    burdened with your sorrow.
    Could you lend me some
    if I would like to borrow?

    What a great thought, borrowing someone else's sorrow in order to lessen his or her burden.
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  • Aarifa Almas (3/14/2016 12:25:00 PM)

    Two hearts defines the true love where Pain and joy both the feelings are entangled... Truly awesome feelings expressed in ur beautiful poem by ur beautiful heart.. (Report) Reply

  • (3/5/2016 11:23:00 AM)

    truly amazing, and very expressive.... (Report) Reply

  • Salman Sayeed (3/5/2016 11:19:00 AM)

    A beautiful words & wounderfull this poem shows the true love of two hearts romantically. Thanks for sharing keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (2/28/2016 11:47:00 PM)

    Very nice poem. But sad to say, not all hearts are open enough... (Report) Reply

    Uzefa Rashida M.a (3/1/2016 10:15:00 PM)

    Dear Jasbir... thank you for liking my poem. and i do agree with you that not all hearts are open but there are always positive things for us we just need to take a step towards that positively. thank you again

  • Bernard Snyder (2/28/2016 5:44:00 PM)

    Sensational job. Yes you did exemplied how two heart's connect. Well done and congrats for this poem being chosen as 'poem of the day. Well deserved. (Report) Reply

    Uzefa Rashida M.a (3/1/2016 10:17:00 PM)

    Thank you Bernard... Your appreciation boosts my confidence.

  • Susan Williams (2/28/2016 4:23:00 PM)

    my sorrows may lessen your cheer
    that is what I fear.- - - - - - - - - - - - -
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - an interesting dilemma, how do we get close to another soul if we don't share our sadnesses as well as our joys
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    Uzefa Rashida M.a (3/1/2016 10:19:00 PM)

    Thank you Susan...You are right that everyone needs to share their joys as well as sorrows and i wanted to show that sharing and caring brings hearts near.

  • Akhtar Jawad (2/28/2016 11:05:00 AM)

    I have already commented on this great poem, but le me congratulate M. Uzefa Rashida for this poem being selected as members poem of the day, a well deserved selection. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (2/28/2016 9:07:00 AM)

    I often wondered why,
    You never ever smile,
    What is that you fear? / Thanks for sharing this wonderful and emotional romantic poem. This reminds me of a beautiful song from Hindi movie 'Aap Ki Parchhaiyan' by Lata Mangeshkar:
    https: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=kDBKpIeMJOs
    (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/28/2016 1:56:00 AM)

    I waited for you dear! Thanks for sharing; and, having your poem as, poem of the day. My own appeared on the 8th of this month. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (2/28/2016 12:12:00 AM)

    Superb poem on longing. You did a wonderful job by narrating the nitty-gritty of two hearts eager to meet with so many questions in mind and desperation to feel the other, Thanks for sharing and a full 10, Also congrats for the PH Poetry of the day (Report) Reply

    Uzefa Rashida M.a (3/1/2016 10:21:00 PM)

    Thank you Asimji for your encouraging words and your all comments are full of zest and real enthusiasm. I wait for your comments. Thank You once again.

  • Aarzoo Mehek (2/28/2016 12:12:00 AM)

    Knock knock.... Is anyone there, make some space for me too in your heart :)
    Lovely poem. a little trust, a little coaxing will break the ice and nothing in this world can stop two hearts from becoming one. beautiful poem.10
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  • Akhtar Jawad (2/20/2016 8:33:00 PM)

    A beautiful painting of two hearts in love but refraining in striping with each other. A difficult moment but once this moment is passed and window is opened in the hearts, fresh air of true love comes in the room and suffocation is gone. Life starts smiling. (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (2/19/2016 10:24:00 AM)

    A beautiful picture of true love. True love is the merging of two hearts. You have beautifully depicted the shades n colors of true love. (Report) Reply

    Uzefa Rashida M.a (2/19/2016 10:42:00 AM)

    thank you for your kind encouraging words. it means a lot to me.

  • Ramesh Rai (2/19/2016 7:42:00 AM)

    A true submission to the beloved one... A soulfu soulful write that can never be denied. (Report) Reply

    Uzefa Rashida M.a (2/19/2016 10:45:00 AM)

    thank you Sir for reading my poem and giving your precious opinion about my work.

    Uzefa Rashida M.a (2/19/2016 10:44:00 AM)

    Thank You Sir for reading my work and giving your precious opinion about it.

  • (2/18/2016 11:02:00 AM)

    A beautiful and an expressive write. Welcome to the poetry site. (Report) Reply

    Uzefa Rashida M.a (2/19/2016 10:46:00 AM)

    Thank you Seema for your encouraging words.

  • Mohammad Ahmadizadeh (2/17/2016 9:45:00 AM)

    So lovely piece. I liked it. Keep writting (Report) Reply

    Uzefa Rashida M.a (2/19/2016 10:47:00 AM)

    thank you for your kind words of encouragement.

  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/17/2016 9:37:00 AM)

    Love! True love; forever being yours. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Uzefa Rashida M.a (2/19/2016 10:48:00 AM)

    Thank You Sir for your sweet words.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 12, 2016

Poem Edited: Friday, February 26, 2016

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