Two hearts
I waited for you dear,
for you to come near.
I waited for you long,
for you to sing a song.
What maketh you so dull?
What maketh you to cry?
Why don't you come to me,
to share with me my joy?
I often wondered why,
You never ever smile,
What makes you shed a tear?
What is that you fear?
Weakened is your heart,
burdened with your sorrow.
Could you lend me some
if I would like to borrow?
You waited for me dear,
I too wanted to be near,
I want to sing a song,
but don't know what I long.
I do, feel your joy
your joy makes me cry,
my sorrows may lessen your cheer
that is what I fear.
I do want to smile,
When my loved ones are near
but always shed my tear
when a brilliant laugh I hear.
Strengthened is my heart
unburdened are my sorrows,
your little words of love
has made the distance narrow.
Come to me my love
Hold my hands in yours
for I want to enjoy the moment
forever being yours.
A true submission to the beloved one... A soulfu soulful write that can never be denied.
Thank You Sir for reading my work and giving your precious opinion about it.
thank you Sir for reading my poem and giving your precious opinion about my work.
You have an incredible mind, Yue. Such beautiful work..! ! :) love it
Beautiful poetry. Love is not just two hearts getting to know each other, it is they share the happiness, the pain of one another. Very fluent rhyming words, bringing forth the true mood of the poem. Good. And thank you for sharing. Do keep writing. One suggestion: 04th line in the second stanza could be corrected as: but don't know what for I long. It makes the line grammatically correct on one part. It give the correct meter to the line too. Pl forgive me if I am trying to correct an English professor!
I like this, especially these lines: Weakened is your heart, burdened with your sorrow. Could you lend me some if I would like to borrow? What a great thought, borrowing someone else's sorrow in order to lessen his or her burden.
Two hearts defines the true love where Pain and joy both the feelings are entangled... Truly awesome feelings expressed in ur beautiful poem by ur beautiful heart..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
my sorrows may lessen your cheer that is what I fear.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - an interesting dilemma, how do we get close to another soul if we don't share our sadnesses as well as our joys
Thank you Susan...You are right that everyone needs to share their joys as well as sorrows and i wanted to show that sharing and caring brings hearts near.