Unable To Think Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Unable To Think

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I can't think
What shall I speak to you?
How to express my feelings?
I am yearning,
My expression wheel isn't
Proceeding ahead.

As you are an omniscient
It is all known to you
You might have known
We are scared with terror
Like a trembling tree.

Deception, violence and lie
Wrath, lust, and greed
Are flowing like water
In a serpentine river of life.

Oh God! you have given us
Human life to obey your law
To preserve your nature
But we are violating day by day,
Is this the reason we are churning?


Now we all humans are conscious
To keep your environment clean
And ever green and beautiful,
Don't compel us to face calamities
Rather give us buds of knowledge
That we will effloresce to blooms.

Wednesday, September 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: knowledge,nature,environment,god
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is English translation of my original Oriya poem " Bhabi Paruni Mu"
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 19 September 2018

deception, violence lies, everywhere, good write sir, namaskar

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Ashika Murali Acharya 19 September 2018

Thought provoking write Sir.-Oh God! you have given us Human life to obey your law To preserve your nature But we are violating day by day, Is this the reason we are churning? Your question could be the answer to our miseries that we face year after year at different parts of the world. Thank for sharing..10+

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 September 2018

LAST night as I dreamt and gods hand held mine he said come son I am waiting but first finish all poetry so he gave me some more time thanks to him I can also read so many

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 September 2018

A powerful and heartfelt prayer to God. A confession of the inadequacies and shortcomings committed by men and a wonderful promise to obey His laws. A very meaningful poem full of wisdom. Very well crafted.10+++

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 September 2018

I can't express myself before You cause You are great Silent! I've nothing, none I'm though Your silence I seek You O'God. ///// nice writing

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 September 2018

Yes this is unimaginable people are indulging in destructive things that will ultimately bring us to peril but people are not learning hence to pray God to show the right path.......very inspiring indeed.......10++++++++

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Valsa George 24 September 2018

A slice of the painful truth! We keep wondering where this world is heading to! People seem to have lost their sense of direction. Greed, deceit and hypocrisy seem to have an upper hand and we are losing all our sacred ideals and values of life! Since we betray the Earth in which we live, the Earth also wreaks its vengeance on us! A thought provoking poem!

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 September 2018

Deception, violence and lie Wrath, , and greed Are flowing like water In a serpentine river of life. Give us buds of knowledge so that we my bloom in your garten as flowers of perfume.. thank u for your great thoughts which brings peace in the mind.. thank u for this prayer poem.. tony

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Mihaela Pirjol 21 September 2018

An ecological poem; a direct dialogue with the Source; a wondering at what humanity has become...this poem resonates truth; an appeal to awakening!

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 September 2018

I am yearning! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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