Unlock yourself…
I believe you are more
than what your eyes reveal
and what your smile conveys
Let me reach into your soul
I know there's so much to dig out
A ripeness of emotions to extract
for you are not a book to be judged by its cover
You are deep
Let me dive into the whirlpool
of your smiles and tears
You are not shallow
Let me pick the blossoms beneath your skin.
Nosheen Irfan © 2017
Let me dive into the whirlpool of your smiles and tears You are not shallow Let me pick the blossoms beneath your skin. wow, what lovely lines do you compose mam, a marvel of art indeed. A classic touch of pure love, passion and an elegant poetic style. 10++++++++ Regards. Subhas
I am very impressed with the sincerity of this poem. The speaker has such an intimate awareness of the true nature of the one she is addressing. This is the true basis for love and beyond the emotion itself of a relationship. I'm reminded of Yeats's beautiful line about his true love: ONE MAN LOVED THE PILGRIM SOUL IN YOU. This love on the soul-level and you express that dimension of love by a series of beautiful things which reveal his true nature and by extension your true nature.
emotions and urge to dive into an ocean of love... beautiful poem.
Let me reach into your soul! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A poem about depth, heavy with its own weight of depth. Much under the surface here, mirroring the imagery of the piece itself. Lovely piece, Nosheen. Bravo!
True everyone has blossoms hidden beneath one's skin...nice of you to point it out
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fantastic poem, the way you explored your lover it reveals a world of your own...