Unlock Yourself Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Unlock Yourself

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Unlock yourself…
I believe you are more
than what your eyes reveal
and what your smile conveys
Let me reach into your soul
I know there's so much to dig out
A ripeness of emotions to extract
for you are not a book to be judged by its cover
You are deep
Let me dive into the whirlpool
of your smiles and tears
You are not shallow
Let me pick the blossoms beneath your skin.


Nosheen Irfan © 2017

Saturday, December 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,soul mates
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 01 January 2018

Fantastic poem, the way you explored your lover it reveals a world of your own...

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 December 2017

Let me dive into the whirlpool of your smiles and tears You are not shallow Let me pick the blossoms beneath your skin. wow, what lovely lines do you compose mam, a marvel of art indeed. A classic touch of pure love, passion and an elegant poetic style. 10++++++++ Regards. Subhas

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Daniel Brick 30 December 2017

I am very impressed with the sincerity of this poem. The speaker has such an intimate awareness of the true nature of the one she is addressing. This is the true basis for love and beyond the emotion itself of a relationship. I'm reminded of Yeats's beautiful line about his true love: ONE MAN LOVED THE PILGRIM SOUL IN YOU. This love on the soul-level and you express that dimension of love by a series of beautiful things which reveal his true nature and by extension your true nature.

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Muhammad Ali 28 December 2017

emotions and urge to dive into an ocean of love... beautiful poem.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 15 December 2017

Beautiful poem uncovering cover from love.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2021

A beautiful poem... touching expression! Loved it

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2018

Let me reach into your soul! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Seamus O Brian 29 January 2018

A poem about depth, heavy with its own weight of depth. Much under the surface here, mirroring the imagery of the piece itself. Lovely piece, Nosheen. Bravo!

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Yiyan Han 26 January 2018

True everyone has blossoms hidden beneath one's skin...nice of you to point it out

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Akhtar Jawad 06 January 2018

Such a beautiful poem, I was enchanted...................

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Nosheen Irfan

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Lahore, Pakistan
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