Upon A Winter's Day Poem by Valerie Dohren
Upon A Winter's Day
So cold upon a winter's day
In icy winds the trees would sway
And all around the snow there lay -
So cold upon a winter's day
I felt the chill upon my face
The mist did all the hills embrace
With frosted trees as fine-spun lace -
I felt the chill upon my face
And snowflakes melting on my hand
Beneath my feet the frozen land
White crystals speckling the sand -
Like snowflakes melting on my hand
With raindrops falling from the sky
The birds to warmer regions fly
You left me here, alone, to sigh -
With raindrops falling from the sky
O why then did you say goodbye …..
A magnificent write about the winter and the snow: ! Brings the very nature close to our heart. For one who has not experienced the snow the portrayal is very vivid. I loved it. The poem in itself sounds very musical. Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year.!
Snow makes even the roughest landscape look flawless for a while, then it's just a load of dirty slush! Illusory layers to this poem! Love it!
O why then did you say goodbye ….. An amazin' poem! ! ! Top marksss Happy X mas! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
A piece wherein lines of apt words are wedded to season and thoughts alike...
A very skilled piece, enjoy the brief time the season is with us.
The winter can be beautiful... and cruel... so similar to love... very nice poem, , , Terry
Perfect rhyme scheme. I feel the rhythm as I read. So lovely and pure, and yet so sad. I thoroughly enjoyed. Well done Val.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 7:32:26 PM # 1.0.0
A very beautiful poem with such ease and flow, rhythmic and musical! ! This deserves full 10 Have a Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year, Valerie! !