Have you ever felt incessant pain
As if the blood coming out of slit vein
Refusing to stop untill you faint
Like a never ending river
deforming the rocks with the dent.
They say, no pain no gain
I wonder what will happen,
if everything I do goes in vain.
Some people say life is like this
I guess they have got everything with ease
Its very easy to say
but far more difficult when you go out and play.
this is wow! ! ! ! Phenomenal...Incredible....Fantastic... i dont know what to say but this is really F**king good! ! ! wow! ! ! your good... for real good. Becca
I think you make an excelent case for how life's a crapshoot. The omnipresence of revelations, paradigms, delusions seized by the unshakeable conviction that — hopefully just once — tranquility and exhilaration will reveal itself proactively.
very strong emotions, emoting the truth of life.well penned and straightforward! ritty
what you have written is a blatent truth and it has been penned aptly. shan
a very emotional write...the doubt that what if everything goes in vain is i think the biggest fear which does'nt let us live naturally...very thought provoking
hmm...true..... i guess this one comes from a real experience...... its heartfelt. thanks.
Valid theory, whether it be, lifestyle, love, business or sport.You are quite adept, at architecting tight, short cropt phrasage...that delivers with poetic impact, and moves with fresh fluxion.Solid Work, Vaibhav. F j R 2009
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I would like to translate this poem
Pain and its curiosity is expressed so eloquently, something all can relate, but few can convey as this.