Vagrant Thoughts Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

Vagrant Thoughts

Rating: 4.9


Have you ever felt incessant pain
As if the blood coming out of slit vein
Refusing to stop untill you faint
Like a never ending river
deforming the rocks with the dent.

They say, no pain no gain
I wonder what will happen,
if everything I do goes in vain.

Some people say life is like this
I guess they have got everything with ease
Its very easy to say
but far more difficult when you go out and play.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 28 January 2009

unique thoughts....strong piece striking concepts... a piece so valuable...poured with all emotions... from a heart that care... sensitive to other's feelings and life in vain.... true to your thoughts..Life is not really easy....10+++++

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Tsira Goge 18 January 2009

Hi, Vaibhav, Very sensitive poems... I think that sad moods only temporarily triumphs to you..., I wish good luck ... 10...... /Thank you.../ Best wishes, Tsira

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Fiona Davidson 13 January 2009

Good strong write here Vaibhav...enjoyed it...

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Autumn Stoddard 23 December 2008

I loved this piece, the way it begins, and the fist stanza was what really got me.

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Tulsi Hanumanthu 20 December 2008

'It's easier said than done' is no unknown saying, but the way you have set this theme re-rolling is not easy to emulate!

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Ritty Patnaik 27 January 2010

very strong emotions, emoting the truth of life.well penned and straightforward! ritty

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 08 August 2009

what you have written is a blatent truth and it has been penned aptly. shan

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a very emotional write...the doubt that what if everything goes in vain is i think the biggest fear which does'nt let us live naturally...very thought provoking

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 09 March 2009

hmm...true..... i guess this one comes from a real experience...... its heartfelt. thanks.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 31 January 2009

Valid theory, whether it be, lifestyle, love, business or sport.You are quite adept, at architecting tight, short cropt phrasage...that delivers with poetic impact, and moves with fresh fluxion.Solid Work, Vaibhav. F j R 2009

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