Vagrant Thoughts Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

Vagrant Thoughts

Rating: 4.9

Have you ever felt incessant pain
As if the blood coming out of slit vein
Refusing to stop untill you faint
Like a never ending river
deforming the rocks with the dent.

They say, no pain no gain
I wonder what will happen,
if everything I do goes in vain.

Some people say life is like this
I guess they have got everything with ease
Its very easy to say
but far more difficult when you go out and play.

Ridge Cahill 16 December 2008

Pain and its curiosity is expressed so eloquently, something all can relate, but few can convey as this.

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Meena Iyer 17 December 2008

Good one :) Like the way you started out in the poem..

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*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

this is wow! ! ! ! Phenomenal...Incredible....Fantastic... i dont know what to say but this is really F**king good! ! ! wow! ! ! your good... for real good. Becca

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Sarah Sisson 19 December 2008

very well this one!

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Brett Ackerman 19 December 2008

I think you make an excelent case for how life's a crapshoot. The omnipresence of revelations, paradigms, delusions seized by the unshakeable conviction that — hopefully just once — tranquility and exhilaration will reveal itself proactively.

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Ritty Patnaik 27 January 2010

very strong emotions, emoting the truth of life.well penned and straightforward! ritty

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 08 August 2009

what you have written is a blatent truth and it has been penned aptly. shan

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a very emotional write...the doubt that what if everything goes in vain is i think the biggest fear which does'nt let us live naturally...very thought provoking

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 09 March 2009

hmm...true..... i guess this one comes from a real experience...... its heartfelt. thanks.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 31 January 2009

Valid theory, whether it be, lifestyle, love, business or sport.You are quite adept, at architecting tight, short cropt phrasage...that delivers with poetic impact, and moves with fresh fluxion.Solid Work, Vaibhav. F j R 2009

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