Vaulting Memories... Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Vaulting Memories...



Right atop the lush green valley
Behold, my aging eyes, a bunch of kites,
Dancing in style and floating high,
They vault into the vast azure sky

I hear children's excited cries,
That rocks the whole place with innocent might
Memories mine now on their flight
Join the past shows in silent delight

23 01 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Nwagwu 03 February 2009

Your words make me dance, Kes, as I read them well laid out in rhythm and beat. Oh, so simple, so fresh, You show us so clearly that the little things, the ordinary things of everyday are sublime. Let me read you again and dance one more time... mark

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Deependra Kumar Jha 02 February 2009

Just awesome! you have excelled once again in bringing out the wonderful memories that are actually the 'Life Line' for most of us. Thanks for sharing. A 10

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 02 February 2009

kesav jee! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..boy have i missed your soft melodious verses....this one was such a great one to restart with....excellent...excellent...you just soar with the kites!

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Mamta Agarwal 02 February 2009

ROCKING THE WHOLE PLACE WITH INNOCENT MIGHT- Kesav this beautiful, graphic line captures the joy, laughter, shrieks- it cojures so many memories in my mind. today i have read it again and i am delighted, feeling nostalgic.i had posted a comment earlier also. any way i always discover new insights in your work each time i read it. thanks. how much i wanted to fly a kite on Basant Panchami... 10 Mamta

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Deepti Agarwal 02 February 2009

kites and vaulting memories always my favourite :)

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Wow, so many poet friends who care deeply about you. I hope your heart is Dancing in style and floating high, Vaulting into the vast azurine sky... among the beauty and grace of many other poets and friends.

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Indira Renganathan 11 March 2010

I don't remember if I have already commented on this nor have I patience to check through the comments down but I have pleasure in addressing you 'the wisdom-poet'...yes, you are

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Patti Masterman 22 September 2009

Great poem and nobody had trouble recognizing it as such, I see. Love your description of memories flying into the vault of mind.

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Sebastine Humaemo 08 February 2009

hy dude...yu got me drownd in ma memories while readin this poem....great work...........realistic n creative works are alwys been n ur style......behold my aging eyes a bunch of kites..............lovely line.........admired a lot..i gve yu 10+++ fr this one.......sebastine

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Omar Ibrahim 06 February 2009

i really dont know how to comment about such an awsome poem........i am out of words

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