Ali Adamson

Weather - Poem by Ali Adamson

This Earth
Becomes pain
When it rains
From the skies
Of one's eyes

Topic(s) of this poem: emotions

Comments about Weather by Ali Adamson

  • Susan Williams (5/27/2017 4:01:00 PM)

    when it rains from the skies of one's eyes- - - - - that, my friend, is an awesome image and it will not be forgotten. This is the joy of writing- -to write something that will linger in people's minds. Well-done. Exceedingly well-done! 10+ (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (1/8/2017 7:51:00 AM)

    Tears of a loved one are always painful, nicely painted human sentiments' (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (8/18/2016 9:59:00 AM)

    A succinct gem of a piece, i must add. (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (8/18/2016 9:59:00 AM)

    How you say a lot in just a few words is an art. A lovely piece. I'm so impressed.10 (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (8/6/2016 4:26:00 AM)

    And those tears they never dry as long as rivers flow, as much as ocean hold it more...beautiful writing Ali, though it just simple but to make little words with such a beautiful poem its hard but you did it :) beautiful! . (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (6/30/2016 2:53:00 PM)

    So brilliantly stated, Ali. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (10/27/2015 12:48:00 PM)

    rain from sky is welcomed but the rain from eyes are not solicited, well-composed poem, i enjoyed reading the poem, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/23/2015 12:08:00 AM)

    Superb, Rain is good in both ways be it from clouds or eyes, it washes everything.10 (Report) Reply

  • (10/13/2015 7:52:00 PM)

    Expressive and meaningful. (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/22/2015 7:29:00 PM)

    Verily, a lovely expression
    Loved reading it
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 22, 2015

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