Dark sky everywhere
Sullen clouds frown at you
The shadow over your happiness
It makes me blue too
Wait for the rain darling
Heavy rainfall fades the pain
Emerge from the woods dear
Onto the vast open plain
The darkness dimmed and the curtain opened
Lightless stars now visible
The moist breeze happily blows
The sadness now invisible
(2008/11/27)
The darkness dimmed and the curtain opened Lightless stars now visible The moist breeze happily blows The sadness now invisible Simply...Great..
A good write Nightingale, after the rain the sun will shine again, very symbolic Lynda xx 10
A beautiful, reassuring lyric. 10 for you. Warm regards, Sandra
Very nice I like it very good poem. Could you please comment some of mine to. Thanks in advance.
woww, , this is very cool, , Love it so much! Wait until the star come, and the sadness invisible, , just thinkin about it make my heart so calm, when I sad, i look at the dark sky, and see the star, that make me better... Thanks for this poem, regards, Naru Kaede, ,
very delicatel and superbly written, throughing out your insight.
I see the darkness... Sad... But very nice ending.. KRista
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is an elegant poem, of sadness that can be washed away. I liked it.