Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 4,811 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

War Of Goodwill - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Sounds of thunder
wakes my soul
In the killing zone
we call this world

For the money
For the glory
For the murder
of a young son

Do we really need to kill
for peace and goodwill


Comments about War Of Goodwill by Dave Alan Walker

  • Gajanan Mishra (3/15/2012 11:59:00 PM)


    Very good poem Dave. I like your poems for its simile verse and clear connotation.

    Thanks. I invite you to read my new poems and comments.

    Yours
    Gajanan Mishra
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  • (12/26/2011 5:31:00 PM)


    Dave, you don't use a lot of words, but those you do use, you certainly use well to say what's important. (Report) Reply

  • (12/25/2011 7:40:00 AM)


    makes one stop & think. (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2011 3:24:00 PM)


    Powerful thoughts, wonderfully expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/23/2011 11:58:00 AM)


    You never stop from stand for something, someone as it for justice..and high morality, that's make your poems so worth to read and a big piece to discover :) ..Hope sound of thunder not scare you but make you striking like it did...Great poem B.D_Unwritten SOul (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2011 10:40:00 AM)


    in our ignorance, we kill what we do not understand... great, thought inspiring poem! (Report) Reply

  • Federico del Corazón (12/19/2011 2:42:00 PM)


    To be a Father
    To be a Son
    To be a Husband
    To be a brother
    To lose a love one
    'How does that feel'

    'It changes YOU'

    great read, thanks for reading me!
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  • (12/19/2011 3:23:00 AM)


    i can feel the emotion of this nice poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/18/2011 2:19:00 PM)


    Be silent! to violence
    we'll find there peace
    Live love and learn! !
    A good poem! ! 10++
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  • (12/18/2011 11:05:00 AM)


    yours are good poem sir
    nice poem from the nice per son
    please read some of mine sir
    your comment is very necesary and important
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  • Cosmic Dreamer (12/18/2011 6:34:00 AM)


    I love this poem Dave... The act of violence shall never bring peace, the act of love and understanding is the only true path to peace... So for us humans, we may well be doomed. For I see no sign of either... (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2011 3:42:00 AM)


    Nice piece there, ... Worthy to digest.. Bravo! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 18, 2011



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